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Industrial AND funky!! Yes! You should try to make more crazy works like this and build a record off of it. lol 5/5 10/10! I couldn't do this genre anyways. I'm too into making the serious kind of music. w/e, GREAT JOB Shawn! :)
Author's Response:
See the only thing about this is that it's made from Garageband loops. I mean I did mess around with it quite a bit so nobody could really remake it on Garageband. But still, would I really be able to make money off of something that is from a program?
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I'm sorry man, I really am. But you have to put more effort into your music. You're using too many PADS. They sound off tune and don't go well together. Take some of the pads out and maybe add some rhythm. Drums, perhaps. But if you took more time to work on this one, I'd be sure to add more points :). But for now, no. :(
Author's Response:
Sorry to disappoint you. If I were a little less ADD, then I might be able to, but I get bored way to easy. Even something that took as little time as this is an accomplishment for me.
And there are drums in it. Towards the end of the song. Did you even listen to the whole thing?
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You stole it. Period. There are about three or four versions of Near's Theme. This is one of them. I suggest you remove this submission before someone reports you.
The proof is right here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyTv4K Ytyzs
Why don't you create more original music?
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I like to feel to this piece. Sounds so peaceful. I've got one problem with this one though, it seems like this is on low volume. It could just be me or my speakers. Whatever, great job man! You captured the mood of a beautiful landscape!
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It's your speakers.
lol
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I know how it feels to work hard on something and then receive terrible criticism on it afterwards. If someone doesn't like the song, they're just going to say it stinks, sometimes are there ever any good people out there who will try and help you.
I disagree with the guy below me about having a long intro. The song does actually jump in right away. I like that. Something tells me, however, that in a few parts of this song it gets pretty "busy." It just sounds that way though. Take "Hell's Radio" for example, in some parts it just sounds so busy, but that's just the structure of the song. I can tell you really put in that much effort, sounds like music by a pro-DJ. I don't know if you mean this to be a loop or an actual song (I assume you want this as a song, yes?) If it is a song you should try to fade in the intro and fade out the very ending of this piece, you know, a kind of smooth transition. I really can't say much of anything else on this one. So that's my rant. ^__^
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I now have an opportunity to express my art. Reasoner, I'm going to build upon your song. I'll show you what I've got to say. Thank you man. Will PM u soon.
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Sorry dude. This 'song' is too repetitive and has no melody. That's all I gotta say for this one. You should try to add an orchestra, or, trance thing or something that'll make it epic. Please try again.
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I sort of agree and disagree with the guy below me. I agree that you didn't capture the song's original style, but you are pretty close though. I disagree about the song part, you CAN hear the song itself. All you need to do though is decrease the volume of the drums until you can hear where it doesn't cover the orchestra, right now that's what it's doing. Kinda master it if you can. ;)
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I volunteer to be your guest singer. You should check out one Zombiffix's songs called "In the Name of Evil" (http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/263715), so you can get a tiny glimpse of how I sing. I sing many different ways, however. I love writing poems. Good song, btw.
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thanks for the offer but I've already got someone else doing it for me sorry. Thanks for the interest though!
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AND the second! I tell ya, you got talent! I always liked the Freezeezy Peak and Mad Monster Mansion themes. True to the original. :)
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